saraveza408
Junior Member
What is the name of your state? CA
Some of you may have seen my previous post "murdering while on a weekend pass" & for those who havent to make a long story short my 34 yr old nephew was stabbed & killed by a 16 yr old gang member who was on a weekend furlough from a juvinal detention/correction boys ranch.Well this kid started the fight that led to the kid killing my nephew & I got it all on video ect.ect.Anyway Ive been asked to write the DA on this case a letter stating why I believe this kid should be tried as an adult.We kinda doubt that any letters would make a difference but its worth a try.
Ok so now im wondering if I should research my letter,use a thesaurus,big words and get all technical in my letter or should I let the words in my letter be just as I would say them?Do I go into feelings about him being tried as an adult or do I lean more on the legalities & the fact this killing kid has priors?Im aiming for a powerful letter that will get noticed & hopefully results.Please anyone if you have any suggestions for how my letters composed I would greatly appreciate it!please & thank you!
Some of you may have seen my previous post "murdering while on a weekend pass" & for those who havent to make a long story short my 34 yr old nephew was stabbed & killed by a 16 yr old gang member who was on a weekend furlough from a juvinal detention/correction boys ranch.Well this kid started the fight that led to the kid killing my nephew & I got it all on video ect.ect.Anyway Ive been asked to write the DA on this case a letter stating why I believe this kid should be tried as an adult.We kinda doubt that any letters would make a difference but its worth a try.
Ok so now im wondering if I should research my letter,use a thesaurus,big words and get all technical in my letter or should I let the words in my letter be just as I would say them?Do I go into feelings about him being tried as an adult or do I lean more on the legalities & the fact this killing kid has priors?Im aiming for a powerful letter that will get noticed & hopefully results.Please anyone if you have any suggestions for how my letters composed I would greatly appreciate it!please & thank you!